And Anything He Did Heanything he did He a sweetheart to Johnny and catered to him like he should be loved but without the whole condescending I m better than you air There was no way I couldn t love Johnny His obsession with pink will just make you smile and the way the whole pack accepts Johnny and is protective of him from the start made me do a whole bunch of awwws and left me with a smile on my faceThe only thing I had a problem with well not really a problem but the whole daddy thing just seemed out of character with Johnny and Hawk Hell even Hawk was shocked when he said something related to daddy Still it was a bit weird but besides that I really liked the book I recommend this fluff D OMG what did I just readA mildly retarted 18 year old calling his shifter lover Daddy EwwwwwwwwAnd that was just one of the things wrong with this story. Ating ritual Will Johnny give Hawk the trust he needs to bind them together or suffer the conseuences that fate’s wicked sense of humor has unleashedNote Each book in Lynn Hagen's Brac Pack collection features a different romantic couple Each title stands alone and can be read in any order However we recommend reading the series in seuential orde.
Lynn Hagen ☆ 0 downloadOmfortable something that I think others might agree wasn t something I was looking for in an erotica Because I ve already borrowed most of this series from a friend I ll likely continue reading it but I really hope it improves A lot I ve read books that were technically ok but the story wasn t that great And I ve read books where the story was awesome but the writing wasn t all that good For me this book was the worst of both worlds It was shallow writing flat characters and a story that didn t do anything other than take up space on my ereader They say that these stories in the series can be read as stand alones but that isn t true Mainly because of the sloppy writing A ton of characters stars of their own books are thrust into the pages with relationships clearly already established but with no real explanation as to who they are Or what they do The only thing I gathered is that these 14 dudes sit around playing video games and pool all day They re referred to as sentries and warriors but they don t actually do anything Hell they don t even turn into wolves But my biggest beef is with the stars of this book Can I just say it was creepy to read this stars of this book Can I just say it was creepy to read this was pedophilia The author new she was crossing that line because she brought it up in a Oh hey this probably looks like pedo but it totally isn t Isn t that weird scene The top calls himself Daddy carries the other guy around constantly wipes his tears buys him pretty pink things sits him on his lap constantly and takes care of him just like a toddler This would be okay if this was clearly a role playing style of relationship In that context Queenie knock yourself out But one of the characters is designated as mildly mentally retarded Maybe I m over sensitive because I ve worked in the disabilities field or maybe it has to do with the fact that Johnny is clearly childlike in a lot of ways however his characterization like much of the book was sloppy and not put together well But whatever it was it left me feeling creeped out I bought this solely because someone was willing to show that the disabled need and deserve love too Inew going in that there was a really big chance that the book wasn t going to do a good job of it but I didn t think it would go this badlyThis book needed depth it needed characterization it needed editing and spellcheck it needed a couple of beta readers to ask the uestions that I as a paying reader was asking like How in hell did a week pass while Johnny was locked in the bedroom and Well if they weren t at the brother s where were they and why didn t Johnny wonder why they were in a strange home And What the hell do these guys do for a living other than sit on their asses all day And hey how about Does Johnny even now these guys are werewolves To all day And hey how about Does Johnny even now these guys are werewolves To fair I wouldn
T Have Known These Guys Were Werewolves And I Mhave 101 Ways To Get More Customers From The Internet (Online Marketing Guides from Exposure Ninja Book 3) known these guys were werewolves and I m mentally disabled This was a shoddy book and a waste of money Even worse I paid for this one than the new one from Josh Lanyon Not a good read at all I completely blame. Ven anyone realizesTreated as a simpleton all his life Johnny Stone has never had anything to call his own until he meets HawkHawk musteep his emaciated mate safe from a sadistic brother while teaching Johnny to trust him Hawk is uickly running out of time to convince Johnny that he isn’t out to hurt him when his mate inadvertently starts the ,
Okay so I don t normally review Siren books but this one was justwrong Here we have Johnny who s basically his brother s slave and Here we have Johnny who s basically his brother s slave and the book states mildly retarded Then we have Hawk who s of course a bad ass shifter Here s my issueso whether Johnny is actually mildly retarded or not that s the way he was portrayed and then to add in rough shifter sexI have no words Not only that but I m convinced Johnny was actually a 10 yr old girl which just makes all of the above even creepier And to add a shitastic cherry on top of all the other ewwwwness Johnny calls Hawk Daddy Are you fucking idding me hereI just looked and 1861 people have read this book and it has a 391 average rating HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE I love my ink as much as the next guy but COME ON This is really gross I really liked this one It was adorable and so sweet This is officially one of the worst books I have ever readand trust me I have read a lot of books across all genresI bought this book because the 1st book in this series was so bad that i thought it had to be a flukethe 2nd book had to be bettergive the author a chancemaybe it was just 1st book inexperience This book made my eyes bleed it was even worse that the 1st one and contained main characters with the nicknames of Pretty Baby and Daddyjust think of my dismay when I realized there are 19 books in this seriesI would have given this negative star ratings if I could Badly written thinly veiled pedophilia That about sums up my thoughts on this oneJohnny is much than just mildly retarded as we re told in the opening chapter and the constant references to him as baby little man and iddo were really starting to disturb me especially since no one addressed the issue or even acknowledged the fact that he s mentally retarded Once I got to the part where Hawk tells Johnny to Fk Daddy s cock after which Johnny starts calling him Daddy I was doneand seriously creeped outshiversI m going to dive right into another book now which will hopefully take my mind off of this one and scrub it permanently from my memory In the Hands Of A Different Writer And Under of a different writer and under different genre romance rather than erotica I think this particular story could have been as heartbreaking as it is heartwarming Unfortunately seeing as neither of those things happened Hawk s Pretty Baby was just a mishmash of amateurish lazy editing uncomfortable scenes and unfortunate storytelling I feel bad for saying so especially since the author seems to have such a follow ship but I can t help itHawk and Johnny s a mentally impaired eighteen year old relationship was in my opinion creepy and very much in the dubious to non consent area of writing Someone might argue against that because of Johnny s age but frankly speaking Johnny s mental state was much closer to that of a child s than an adult s and therefore seemed somewhat disturbing Don t get me wrong I understand that this wasn t meant to be anything than it was but it still raised red flags for me and made me highly unc. #349 Siren Everlasting Classic ManLove Erotic Alternative Paranormal Romance MM werewolvesHawk Magnar commander of twelve sentry wolves never thought he’d discover his mate in a hospital for an anxiety attack Under the illusion he was going to comfort a young child the alpha’s mate Cecil had befriended he finds a man who needs protection than ,